Robin Phillips commented on Devil's Bargain by Stella Rimington (Manon Tyler, #1)
One lie put the nation at risk. Another might save it.
Harry Bristow: policeman, father, …
I'm enjoying the story, but I'm getting irritated that proper nouns at the start of chapters aren't capitalised for some reason.
For example, chapter 26 starts:
‘Well, manon,’ said wilberforce, ‘when I asked you to keep close to your friend Louise and find out more about this MP Peter Robinson, I certainly didn’t expect you to come back so soon with a story like this.