D. Harrigon reviewed A Curious Beginning by Deanna Raybourn
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2 stars
This was a DNF for me. The book opens well with a chapter establishing the character doesn't fit into the typical mould of Victorian women, after the death of their aunt. Not really anything we haven't read in dozens of books before. Some excitement grabs our attention with a burglary, a baron and a nice kick off of the plot.
Then, oh, wow, seriously. We are introduced to a gruff man who will probably be the love interest. And the two talk at each other for an entire chapter without advancing the story much at all. And THEN CONTINUE TO DO THIS FOR FOUR MORE CHAPTERS. WTF? Not even a B-plot. Not other character apart from a messenger boy who appears for a paragraph and never returns. After four chapters of the heroine demonstrating that she's not like typical Victorian women and the male lead being a gruff man who …
This was a DNF for me. The book opens well with a chapter establishing the character doesn't fit into the typical mould of Victorian women, after the death of their aunt. Not really anything we haven't read in dozens of books before. Some excitement grabs our attention with a burglary, a baron and a nice kick off of the plot.
Then, oh, wow, seriously. We are introduced to a gruff man who will probably be the love interest. And the two talk at each other for an entire chapter without advancing the story much at all. And THEN CONTINUE TO DO THIS FOR FOUR MORE CHAPTERS. WTF? Not even a B-plot. Not other character apart from a messenger boy who appears for a paragraph and never returns. After four chapters of the heroine demonstrating that she's not like typical Victorian women and the male lead being a gruff man who hates women we get to the part where she tidies up his workshop a bit and he's annoyed but impressed yet again, and no. I crashed out at this point. This is just terrible, indulgent, unoriginal, badly edited and maybe something interesting happens just after this but I flicked ahead and it was mostly just page after page of these two talking at each other and doing nothing.
Terrible book.