Marek reviewed The World We Make by N. K. Jemisin (Great Cities, #2)
Closure, satisfying, but you can feel the author's struggle with it.
4 stars
Jemisin has a talent for characters you can care for and care about, and a smoothness to her writing that makes difficult ideas and abstract notions seem intuitive. All of that is on show here, and at a pace to get a story done before the world (our one) takes itself to pieces.
Its predecessor, The City We Became is a better book. It takes more time to develop the characters, their cares and arcs, though we barely get to see one of the most interesting ones (I won't go into too much detail in case you haven't read that one). We see them here, but mostly in small snatches of narrative and events rather than as a full point-of-view thread through the book. This is still a rollicking good read and a full, rich story, though. That the book isn't quite what it could have been is just made …
Jemisin has a talent for characters you can care for and care about, and a smoothness to her writing that makes difficult ideas and abstract notions seem intuitive. All of that is on show here, and at a pace to get a story done before the world (our one) takes itself to pieces.
Its predecessor, The City We Became is a better book. It takes more time to develop the characters, their cares and arcs, though we barely get to see one of the most interesting ones (I won't go into too much detail in case you haven't read that one). We see them here, but mostly in small snatches of narrative and events rather than as a full point-of-view thread through the book. This is still a rollicking good read and a full, rich story, though. That the book isn't quite what it could have been is just made clear, partly by Jemisin's fluency and pace.
I get the feeling that's because Jemisin was in a rush - something she notes in the Acknowledgements at the end. What I had thought was a clear reaction to Trump and the white supremacy he allowed to push through from the depths all over the surface in The City We Became seems to have been more prescient, she was working out implications to come in the writing that were more clear everywhere by the time got through the publishing process. The real reaction was in this book, but the violence and crappiness of the world Trump unleashed seems to have been a bit much for both the story and the author (and who can blame her?).
While there are some superb stories and working out of key threads in this book, the disjoint between the humanity and the other-worldly machinations means that several key events gets a 'real-world shittiness' followed by a roll-for-random-Lovecraft-encounter feel it to. The weave isn't quite as tight was it was in the first, because there isn't time.
In the final third, there's a sprint finish which gets things done, and wraps things up, but the pace leaves some (by no means all!) of the humanity behind.
It's very cool, and very well worth it. And I really want to know what games Jemisin plays.
What was to be at trilogy is now a complete duology, and I cannot wait to see what she brings next.
